Evaluation 4

Before fully writing the story line to my thriller i created a questionnaire to find out what people like in a thriller. For example i asked if people prefer psychological or action thrillers, the most popular result was a bit of both and that's what i did. I also used the feedback from the audience to make many more decisions. The research i did also helped with my creative process, for example the black and white which i used like on 'Kill Bill' to show its a past event. I also used similar camera techniques and shots from Christopher Nolan's Batman movies.

 

Some of the feedback I received after my first edit was that it was hard to establish a relationship between ben and Luke's character. So in response to this i added a shot to show that they were friends and that luke was visiting bens grave. I took a photo of them together and then got a close up shot of it and added it to the graveyard sequence.